The Uninhabited island
In Uninhabited island is very quiet, but is a human Jack and a monkey Jim. This story from a llong time ago, there is a human and a monkey with there boat went to the Uninhabited island.
What they do in the Uninhabited island? They are going to see what happens in there and is
food, the temperature is cold or warm…… But they are not lucky, They went to the sea when
they went out to sea. So their ship was sent to the bottom of the sea by the waves. But they still
successfully boarded the island. Although they boarded the island but the man and monkey is
lost there don’t know where they are and they are work hard in the island .And they are use
hand write a very big “SOS” this mess help. Day by day they think we must build a house to live
they are thin aboutk where we can find building materials. The human thinks we can find wood,
grass and Leaves can build a house. first, the monkey on the tree gate the leaves and the human are gate the woods, but how do you cut the tree? The human think we can go bake
the sea bank see can we find we boat and use boat and leves make a smell house they
walked and walked at last they find they are the boat , they are very lucky to find their boat.
Now the sky is black and black because the sun is lower and lower that means is nearly
night time so they fast build the boat in to a small house and they just pass the one day.
What they do in the Uninhabited island? They are going to see what happens in there and is
food, the temperature is cold or warm…… But they are not lucky, They went to the sea when
they went out to sea. So their ship was sent to the bottom of the sea by the waves. But they still
successfully boarded the island. Although they boarded the island but the man and monkey is
lost there don’t know where they are and they are work hard in the island .And they are use
hand write a very big “SOS” this mess help. Day by day they think we must build a house to live
they are thin aboutk where we can find building materials. The human thinks we can find wood,
grass and Leaves can build a house. first, the monkey on the tree gate the leaves and the human are gate the woods, but how do you cut the tree? The human think we can go bake
the sea bank see can we find we boat and use boat and leves make a smell house they
walked and walked at last they find they are the boat , they are very lucky to find their boat.
Now the sky is black and black because the sun is lower and lower that means is nearly
night time so they fast build the boat in to a small house and they just pass the one day.
On the second day they try to find food to eat, the monkey Jim see a tree have lots
bananas then Jim say aaa~ that means I find the food, jack listen Jim says so he go here see
what happens and see lots bananas jack is very happy and Jim claim on the tree and take the
bananas pass jack , Jim take all the bananas out the tree and jack says:” we have lots of food
to eat now”. Are evening jack and Jim is eat bananas because they are so hungry, so they
eat lots of bananas.
bananas then Jim say aaa~ that means I find the food, jack listen Jim says so he go here see
what happens and see lots bananas jack is very happy and Jim claim on the tree and take the
bananas pass jack , Jim take all the bananas out the tree and jack says:” we have lots of food
to eat now”. Are evening jack and Jim is eat bananas because they are so hungry, so they
eat lots of bananas.
10 bananas , so jack give 5 bananas to Jim , give 5 bananas to Jim, so now they don’t have
any food left so Jim and jack in the water find fish and crabs and use rock makes fire to hot the
fish and crabs, Jim is looking for the fish and crabs and jack use rock make fire and help Jim
look for the fish and crabs. They wait for 1 hour Jim find 2 fish and 1 crab, and Jack finds 4fish
and 2 crabs. Jack and Jim are having fun find the fish and crubs the fish and crabs is very yummy.
fish and crabs, Jim is looking for the fish and crabs and jack use rock make fire and help Jim
look for the fish and crabs. They wait for 1 hour Jim find 2 fish and 1 crab, and Jack finds 4fish
and 2 crabs. Jack and Jim are having fun find the fish and crubs the fish and crabs is very yummy.
At the fourth day they see a boat they think the boat can save them but it is not they
just sailing away, Jim make an “SOS” on a big leave and the boatman see the “SOS” and on
there way to jack and Jim live ---- Uninhabited island, the boat is not likely under the sea they
are some sharks and the sharks come out and broken the boat and eat inside the people, now
jack and Jim knows they have sharks in the sea and the sharks is very big jack think we need
helicopter to save us, so jack cell Jim get some stick and make fire and the helicopter can see,
but is no helicopter here they think the boat have an engine so they can use the sailing boat engine
to make a helicopter, and the hardwork and the day is finish.
just sailing away, Jim make an “SOS” on a big leave and the boatman see the “SOS” and on
there way to jack and Jim live ---- Uninhabited island, the boat is not likely under the sea they
are some sharks and the sharks come out and broken the boat and eat inside the people, now
jack and Jim knows they have sharks in the sea and the sharks is very big jack think we need
helicopter to save us, so jack cell Jim get some stick and make fire and the helicopter can see,
but is no helicopter here they think the boat have an engine so they can use the sailing boat engine
to make a helicopter, and the hardwork and the day is finish.
At the fifth day, the wind is very big because there have a helicopter coming to
Jack and Jim is very happy jack fast find some stick and make fire and the helicopter see the
fire and save Jack and Jim.
Jack and Jim is very happy jack fast find some stick and make fire and the helicopter see the
fire and save Jack and Jim.
At the last day, Jack and Jim is a best friend!
The End !
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